Monday, March 3, 2008
Writers Week!!!
Sunday, March 2, 2008
Writers Week XIV
One other individual that has made me reconsider my views was Scott Woldman of Scott Woldman and Co. While he himself didn't talk very much (I think the director took all the questions), his story for Speed Dating: The Musical has made me rethink the way I approach new music and moreover, musical theater. The appeal of this specific piece was the way he decided to approach one of the all important questions of all of our lives: what is love? While we weren't given an answer in our session, I don't doubt that the audience members will have dazzling revelations during the premier. Just because of the nature of certain popular musicals that were in circulation (particularly RENT and Wicked), I didn't pay much attention to them. But after sitting through what I thought was going to be a boring musical (something silly based upon a silly concept could only mean more silly-ness) turned out to be quite entertaining, though I don't think singing, "Will you will you will you will you sleep with me?" is gonna get me any closer to a girlfriend.
Finally, the most exciting part of Writers Week (for me anyway): the student writers! While I wasn't able to make any of the performances of my classmates (sincere apologies, guys) I was able to catch a few good friends and cheer them on. Wednesday heard the struggle in Sarah Glazer's short story and saw Steph Tham's interesting relationship with college as well as Greggy-T's lament of bygone days and Rita Pello's hyperactive, winking dog. Thursday was an even better treat with Sheades and Mealy. It seems like every year our own writers get better and better and maybe one day, I'll have the courage to stand up there with them, complaining about my dead-end job, speaking my heart, or making light of a disastrous situation. Writers Week forever!
Writer's Week 2008
Another person whom I admired was Billy Lombardo. I thought his poems were really sad, but extremely good as well. His poems were so descriptive and described really interesting situations. I thought the one happy poem his said, about the Sox winning the world series, and him sharing that moment with his son was really touching. From that, his piece, "First Time you are Punched", although extremely sad, it shows the audience the realization that this actually does happen to some kids. The title of the poem is very literal, however the poem has a much deeper meaning. The line that I thought was especially touching, was when he was describing the boy in the corner with his black eye, and his parents fighting in the background, and he is trying to "butterfly kiss the wall...to make the black eye go away." His other piece, "How to Remember a Day with your Son" was also sad but I thought that it was very powerful at the same time. I think the way he reads the poems also add to the effect, because he can read it in the way that he planned it to be read. His final piece, "How I Knew you were Mad at Me" also had some sad parts, but also had some funny parts as well, such as "I knew you were mad at me when...you set the wipers too slow." Overall, Billy Lombardo was very powerful author that I extremely admire.
Moving from the sadder pieces, Scott Woldman's "Speed Dating- the Musical" was absolutely hilarious! Depicting the situations many people go through, this musical seems like it would be extremely entertaining to go see! I thought the song where the boys sang "will you sleep with me" over and over, with the girls singing "boys suck" was so funny! The one girl that sang was also hilarious. I will definitely remember them! As for Daphne Willis and Company, their talent was amazing. I thought her singing was really, really good...I actually did look her up on iTunes!
Finally, but definitely not least, was Marc Smith, perhaps the most memorable of all. I remembered him from last year because he was my favorite, and of coarse, he walked up the banisters. I admire him so much, having memorized over 200 songs, along with being the founder of slam poetry and a great entertainer, he is really someone to remember. I was surprised to find out that he was really shy when he was younger, but I think he would be an inspiration to those who are really shy. One thing he said to the audience that stuck with me was he said, "If you feel there is a destiny in you, there is." I found this line to be inspirational personally. As for the poems he performed, they can't be beat. The one poem about the rainbow and it being a person who is bowlegged, with one foot in the heart of a woman, and one in the heart of a man was one of my favorites. I thought that all the poems he performed were really powerful and I would have to say Marc is definitely my favorite person who came to writer's week. The poem that I remembered him saying last year, and I always will remember him performing is the poem where he walks around the whole auditorium, saying there is a different animal "in him."
Overall, Writer's Week 2008 was an extremely inspirational, entertaining, and memorable experience. It makes me sad that I could not see anyone that was in our class, but I'm sure all of them did an awesome job. All the people who came to Writer's Week were so talented and I really enjoyed seeing them all. I feel so privledged to be a Fremd student that is able to have this experience. Let's just say that Writer's Week 2008 will be hard to beat!
Writers Week Blog
Callous as it may seem, I felt writers week began poorly (although it ended on a high note) with Screenwriter Bill Kelly's somewhat dry humor and basic Q&A. His relatively bleak visions of Hollywood, his reasoning for being a movie writer (as opposed to a television writer, which he wished to be), his depictions of a writer's place in Hollywood, and his general attitude seemed almost misplaced in a week made to celebrate the successes and greatness of writing, rather than it's shortcomings. His saving grace, however, came as he explained that the reason he, or any other writer, stays in Hollywood is devotion to his (or their) work, rather than money. This sentiment stood in stark contrast to the schema of his responses.
The end of the weekend, though, saw a dramatic turn for writers week, as we saw Billy Lombardo speak about a fictional bakery fire in "The Pilgrim Virgin" where a supposed "punk" saved not only his life, but his family's lives, or his "First Punch" at the hands of his own father in the midst of terrible family issues. Very moving. Scott Woldman's "Speed Dating: The musical" in turn turned the mood of writer's week upside down again with incredible, often inappropriate humor. Chorus quotes such as "Will you will you will you will you sleep with me" will be remembered for years to come, not to mention his impecible style and awesome timing in showing portions of different conversations summing up with "Thats an unusual question. I suppose I would take it in the butt." Truly Hilarious.
Daphne Willis just rocked. Not much more to say. A Fremd Graduate with a semi-successful band living independantly the way they want to. Nothing more respectable. And, of course, Marc Smith, my ~60 year old socialist slammin' poetry hero. Climbing the banister twice while yelling "bankers lend it, women spend it" introducing himself as "the guy who drops the F-Bomb" and myriad other out-of-bounds-yet-creatively-relevant poems, in addition to the more acceptable "My father's coat" poem. And, of course, talking to him after he finished showed how deep he really was, and how encouraging he tries to be to aspiring writers.
PS: He liked my hat. Take that, you nay-sayers!
Writer's Week XIV
Friday, February 29, 2008
WW XIV
After Kelly, we saw Billy Lombardo. Although he was a great writer, his pieces scared me a little. They were really dark and violent, two characteristics I'm not very fond of.
I really loved Scott Woldman and Co. not just because they were hilarious, but also because they're so good at singing and the plot is so well thought out. It was such an interesting plot and really unique. However, their jokes were repetitive and very scandelous. It felt uncomfortable hearing those crude remarks because I don't support them, but also because there were so many teachers around. Daphne Willis was also a great group to listen to because she showed us that writing's not all about the essays and research papers, but it can inspire people in other forms. She had an amazing voice, and I was so jealous she could sing like that.
This year, I was so glad we got to wrap up Writer's Week with the legendary Marc Smith. Although I saw him last year, his poems still leave me in awe and inspiration. He is such an amazing poet, and it always amazes me how a man of that age can climb a railing and memorize over 200 poems. I always hated writing because I felt it was just an obligation; just another essay for just another English class. However, after this week, everything my friends said would be a brainstorm for a story or a poem in my head. For example, I was in gym class, and we were "supposed" to be running laps on the shelf, but the narrow lanes were congested so my friends and I opted to go behind the bleachers and go around to the other side. My friend simply commented on how quiet it was, and I thought about what she said; how just that single wall of bleachers could separate the loud from the soft, the noisy from the quiet, the vigorous from the still.
My writing experience was also so amazing. I wasn't nervous at all until I woke up Thursday morning and remembered that I was speaking first period. I thought I was prepared, but as I sat on the couches on the stage, I couldn't remember any motions I was supposed to do, or whether or not my accents would turn out to be funny. I started to get nervous about whether or not the students would really like what I wrote, but after being so generously supported by the other writers on stage as well as the audience, my fears dissipated and now all I remember is a good experience. Thank you Writers Week!
Thursday, February 28, 2008
WW RESPONSES
Thursday, February 14, 2008
"Luke, I am your FATHER!"
Ch 6: Pap's Rant
Wednesday, February 13, 2008
3 Important Things that Happen in Chapter 15 :D
Another important detail occurred on page 83 when Jim called Huck "boss." Although we know that Huck is a person of no account, Jim still refers to Huck as his boss. This is important to the story so that audiences are reminded of the social relationship between Huck and Jim: white boy and runaway slave, respectively. Although Twain makes efforts to humanize Jim, audiences must remember that Jim is still a slave and thus still inferior to Huck, however "worthless" he may be. Moreover, by clearly establishing this relationship, we, as the readers, are more aware of the times when Huck is following his heart and/or growing in maturity.
Finally, the third detail take us back to the beginning of the chapter when Jim and Huck have been separated on the river. They send each other "whoops" in hopes of finding the other. However, they fail to find the other until the morning after. But the result is irrelevant when considering the why of the actions and behaviors of Jim and Huck. Throughout the night, Jim and Huck are persistent in their whooping until they can not hear each other any longer. This determination demonstrates and foreshadows signs of a growing relationship between the two characters. Instead of showing repugnance or disgust, they share a compassion and care enough about each other to arduously try to locate the other's whoops.
What aspects of Huck Finn could be considered offensive?
Do Huck's purpose for lying change?
As the adventure progresses and as he matures emotionally, his purpose for his lies also change. They are not for his own enjoyment anymore, but instead only a necessary precaution that is used when he thought he absolutely needed it. Although not too far towards the end of the book, Huck can be seen to responding to his emotional growth when he lies to the slave-hunters in chapter 16. Huck decides that he can't take the social pressure that's going through his mind between what his heart believes as right and what he's been grown up with in his society - Jim. "I was paddling off, all in a sweat to tell on him; but when he says this, it seemed to kind of take the tuck all out of me... Do you belong on it [raft]?... I reckon we'll go adn see for ourselves. [Huck] 'I wish you would,' says I, 'because it's pap that's there... he's sick'" (Twain 89). As he feels the constant guilt about helping Jim run away, he finds slave-hunters and is about to turn Jim in, but at the last minute, decides not to because Jim has been so kind to him and left an impact on Huck. He lies in order to save Jim's life, a sure sign of his emotional maturity.
In the end, Huck resorts to lying when he needed it. Instead, Huck began to tell the truth because he knew that it was right, even though it was harder and riskier. "Well, I says to myself at last, I'm a-going to chance it; I'll up and tell the truth this time, though it does seem most like setting down on a kag of powder and touching it off just to see where you'll go to" (Twain 186). When Huck told the truth to Mary Jane, it was an important turning point in his life because he constantly leaned closer towards his heart in the battle between his heart and his social conscience. He knew it wouldn't be easy, but because Huck knew that what the Duke and the King were doing was wrong, he told the truth since it was right. Although at first Huck starts off as an immature boy that lied because it provided excitement and laughter inside, he grows and changes into a more mature person, and all this is shown through his developing use of lies.
Pap's Role in Huck's Life
This poor opinion Huck holds of himself leads to his idolization of Tom Sawyer. He always comments that Tom does things with more "style," and that Tom is more adventurous and intelligent that he is. Pap has instilled this submissive attitude in his son by years of abuse and neglect. Since Huck does not believe his opinion has worth, he is willing to follow Tom's foolish plans and ignore his own good judgment.
Huck is finally freed from his father's clutches when Jim informs him Pap was the dead man in the house they saw floating on the river. Without a tangible object to fear, Huck can begin to come into his own person and realize his own self-worth. Pap symbolized Huck's insecurities, and his death becomes Huck's release from his self-imposed inferiority to Tom and other members of high society.
What is Pap's role in Huck's journey?
Twain introduces Pap at the beginning of chapter 5, painting an already grisly picture of a character whose morals match his appearance. "His hair was long and tangled and greasy, and hung down, and you could see his eyes shining though as if he were behind vines" (Twain, 19). This description is meant to show that Pap has little regard for what society thinks of him and acts based on that. Later, Twain insinuates that Pap is motivated mainly by two things: his desire for alcohol and his warped southern sense of honor. This "honor" comes into play almost right after Huck is reunited with his father, manifesting itself in the form of Pap's rage over Huck having learned to read and therefore feeling "inferior" to his son. A caring father would typically be overjoyed to see his son rise up in society, but Pap has other, more restricting plans for Huck.
Pap's big rant comes in chapter 6. He begins by complaining about his belief that the government has robbed him of his rightful spot as one of the richest men in town and forced him to live out in the woods. The truth is that the government actually tried to act in the best interest of Huck, but Pap fails to see that and this part of his speech shows that even white people often fail in getting along, and suffer delusions and prejudice about the government and each other. The next part of the rant is somewhat paradoxical. Pap states that he would never vote again due to the fact that there were places where black people could vote. He also presents a great example of a very intelligent black man who can obviously contribute a lot to society, but nonetheless opposes him. Here Twain not only satirizes the foolishness of Pap but also the foolishness of every American that maintains a racist viewpoint despite the huge amount of evidence to the contrary.
As Huck travels down the river, the racist values that Pap and society have ingrained in his mind slowly begin to peel away. Despite the similarities in outdoor and practical capabilities and, in the beginning, ideology, Huck drifts further and further away from his father as he comes to know Jim better. However, Huck's attitide towards his father resurfaces in how he sees the duke and king, showing that experience with Pap has also given Huck some important abilities.
Despite being a highly illogical person, Pap shows his capability in dealing wih people when he tricks the judge into letting him escape. This ability is shared not only by Huck but also by Tom Sawyer, who in the end of the book hinders Jim's bid for freedom with his imagination and influence over Huck. The ability to make people believe a lie is shown in this book by the many evil characters that hinder the plot. From Huck's perspective, people who hindered him in happiness include not only Pap and the duke and king who directly put Huck into danger, but also the Widow who tried to civilize him,Tom who polluted his mind with outlandish ideas, and his own conscience that tried to make him do the "correct thing". Seen in this light, Pap is an extreme example of the many forces in the story that hold Huck back from his self realization in religion, morals, and freedom that even he is forced to pursue.
Is Jim Intelligent?
Before someone can answer the question, “Is Jim Intelligent?” one needs to determine what their definition of intelligence is. Recently, in psychology class, we had a unit on the different theories behind intelligence and what most individuals believe being “smart,” is defined as. Most psychologists believe in different facets to intellect. According to Robert Sternberg, the three forms of intelligence are analytic, creative, and practical.
Analytic intelligence is defined as “problem-solving” intelligence. Jim demonstrates analytic intelligence when, as Reena pointed out, reasoning his escape from Miss Watson’s house. Jim is presented with a problem of when and how to escape, and he successfully solves his problem by analyzing his situation (“I knowed ole missus en de widder wuz goin' to start to de camp-meet'n' right arter breakfas' en be gone all day.”) and coming up with a winning solution (Well, when it come dark I tuck out up de river road, en went 'bout two mile er more…”) (Twain 44).
Creative intelligence is defined as the ability to deal with new situations by drawing on old knowledge. Jim uses creative intelligence when persuading the Grangerford servants not to steal his raft. Jim says, “En I ast ‘m if dey gwyne to grab a young white genlman’s propaty” (Twain 112). Jim knows about the fear black slaves have of punishment by white men and of their power of them, and Jim uses this to his advantage.
Practical intelligence is better known as “street smarts,” and the way you are able to adapt to your environment. Jim demonstrates this best when quickly learning how to cover his tracks, travel safely during night, catch (or steal) food, live on the river, and disguise himself when necessary. Although Jim may not possess obvious intelligence in educational areas and “book smarts,” Jim’s instinctual knowledge proves his high aptitude.
Pap's Role in Huck's Journey
More than just a plot device, however, Pap is our first representation of opposition, specifically, actively harmful behavior stemming from society. Pap is a greedy, unfeeling, immoral, outcast, displaying a pertinent fact that needed to be said before the adventure could begin - that not everyone who lives outside the boundaries of social norms is good or even capable.
This brief encounter with Pap sets us up for Jim shortly thereafter, as Jim seems to have all of the important characteristics that Pap does not. Pap is abusive while Jim is kind and even afraid for himself; Pap wants Huck for his money while Jim wants Huck for companionship; Pap abuses and belittles Huck while Jim encourages Huck and does what he can to help him (taking his shift watching the raft, etc.)
PS: Stretchy Cat, gogogo!
Do Huck's purposes for lying change throughout the story?
I think the major turning point for Huck away from society and his lying habits is after the duke and the king lie to the town about being dead Peter's brothers to steal money from orphan girls, whom he feels badly about. Says Huck, "...and the king, he told it all over again on his hands to the duke, and both of them took on about that dead tanner like they'd lost twelve disciples. Well, if ever I struck anything like it, I'm a n-word. It was enough to make a body ashamed of the human race." (Twain 162). Before this time, Huck went along with anything anyone told him to, even for the enjoyment and stealing reasons that the duke and the king displayed. Up until this point, Huck has gradually been growing farther away from society, no longer needing to know the going-ons like he did previously and was perfectly content living on the river with Jim. After the duke and king try to destroy an innocent family for their money, Huck becomes ashamed of what society(represented by the king and duke) and ultimately, what he has become. The next time Mary Jane questions him about something, he decides to tell her the truth, an important step for Huck, demonstrating his maturity growth and his complete break from society's ways. "...though I can't say for certain; but it looks so to me, anyway; and yet here's a case where I'm blest if it don't look to me like the truth is better and actuly safer than a lie." (Twain 186). By telling Mary Jane the truth, he shows a realization of lying and it's effects, also showing is want to change and become a better person, away from the rest of the "human race". He eventually uses lying only when trying to save Jim's life, like lying to the Phelp's to get Jim back, and tries to tell the truth more often than habitually lying to everyone, which usually gets him into trouble. Huck's use of lying shows Huck's growth throughout the story as he changes the purposes in which he uses it.
Circus/Mob scene
Another example of how Twain uses contrast is between Huck and Tom which we did talk about in class. The idea of America vs. Europe is the same as Huck vs. Tom. Another way I looked at it was that the carnival represented America and the lynching scene, Europe. Twain wanted to make the transition immediate so we could get just how different these two are. Can we talk about this more in class, I want to explore the idea more and build off others imput.
What is Pap's role in Huck's journey?
However, I believe Pap's lack of morals that influenced Huck is also what caused Huck to not only have inter battles with himself about what the "right" thing to do is, what his heart wants, and what is socially accepted, but also to help Huck create his own opinions and help him decide what it is his own heart wants. Huck says at different point in the book that "pap says" this and "pap always said" that, so obviously Huck was influenced by him. But further, I believe that Pap was used as a figure to help Huck make his own decisions and take that step further to decide what he thinks is right, despite the moral corruption his father inflicted upon him.
Furthermore, I believe that because Pap was such a failure as a father, along with Huck's lack of family, this also helped Huck feel more closely connected with Jim because they were so close and Jim was constantly helping and looking out for Huck, calling him "honey" and always being happy to see him. Because of this, I believe that Huck felt a stronger connection to Jim because it was like Jim was filling this empty spot that Huck had, where family, and a father figure were supposed to be.
Despite Pap not being in the novel very long, Pap did have an influence on Huck's journey and his overall growth of a person as well. Pap's negative influence on Huck also helped Huck take a step towards making HIS own decisions and deciding what it is Huck thinks is right and wrong (what his heart says verse what his conscience says; what society says verse what he wants). Also, Pap's failure as a father helped make Huck and Jim's relationship stronger because Jim was seen as like family to Huck. Overall, it was Pap's negativity that helped Huck grow and learn more, along with feel a stronger connection to Jim.
What is Pap's Role in Huck's Journey?/Relationship With Huck
How does Huck's Relationship with Pap compare/connect to Huck's relationship with Jim?
Pap is the father of Huckleberry Finn, in the novel . Huck's father is a middle-aged man who although briefly appears in the novel, greatly affects Huck, and how the entire novel is played out. Twain describes him as a snake-like character. "He was most fifty, and he looked it. His hair was long and tangled and greast, and hung down, and you could see his eyes shining through like he was behind vines...ther werent no color in his face...it was whie...a white to make a body sick." Pap is a very conservative southern man who imposes his beliefs strongly on his son Huck. We learn of his several political stances throughout his appearance and how they affect the way Huck lives out his life. He admires his father, although his father is a cruel drunkard. Huck shows a sign of pity and remorse to Pap, and he always seems to forgive him, even under the worst circumstances. This portrays Huck's compassion to another human. In the novel, Pap represents the freedom that Huck lacks in his life, as Huck is restrained by society. However, the major aspect of their relationship lies within the fact that Pap does not represent a father character in which children should look up to, and later on Jim's relationship with Huck makes Pap's sad attempts at fatherhood complete in a just manner.
Jim on the other hand, seems to make up for Pap's mistakes and ultimate departure from the world (floating house), as he comes into the story to represent a more-than-friend figure, and possible even a fatherly one. Throughout their journey, all the two grow fond of each other, and grow to depend and look after each other. In various life on the river scenarios, we see Jim looking after Huck by taking up his shifts in watching the raft while the other sleeps. Also, throughout various times that the two become seperated and reunited, the two break down into tears and hug each other. We do not see Huck missing his father in such a way. In the beginning of the novel, Jim is depicted as simple and trusting, to the point of gullibility. These qualities are not altered during the course of the novel; instead, they are fleshed out and prove to be positives instead of negatives. Jim’s simple nature becomes common sense, and he constantly chooses the right path for him and Huck to follow. For example, when Huck and Jim are on Jackson’s Island, Jim observes the nervous actions of birds and predicts that it will rain. Jim’s prediction comes true as a huge storm comes upon the island. The moment is an important one, for it establishes Jim as an authority figure and readers recognize his experience and intelligence. Jim’s insight is also revealed when he recognizes the duke and the king to be frauds. Like Huck, Jim realizes he cannot stop the con men from controlling the raft, but he tells Huck that “I doan’ hanker for no mo’ un um, Huck. Dese is all I kin stan’.” As we compare Jim and Pap, Jim definitely comes out on top as the relationship with the most positive results.
